Suhani's SAS Blog

1. How have you grown as a writer?     I have grown as a writer because I can understand and do many more things in my writing. I know how to correctly use commas in dialogue and I know how to correctly punctuate thoughts. I have grown because on my first personal narrative I didn't have a "So What?" ending or a S.A.C.R.E.D. lead. 2. What new skills do you feel more confident to apply to your narrative writing? I feel like I can use dialogue more because I have learned how to use it correctly by using speaker tags and commas. I feel like I can use inner thinking and "So What?" endings and S.A.C.R.E.D. leads. I have learned all about how to correctly use these. 3. What challenges did you face when writing your PN? I got stuck at some parts because I didn't know what to write. I just couldn't find anything that would go well with the sentence before it. I had to think about "How Do I Do DAT?" in the middle section of my PN. 4. How...

Sticking It On Floor My eyes were puddled with tears. They were slowly trying to make their way out, but they weren’t. I felt like I had willingly ended the world for my self. You're braver than that. You never cry. No matter how hurt you are, you never cry. “It’s just one beam routine, in the millions you’ll do later when you’re in a higher level,” Coach Jasmin consoles me. “That beam routine just happens to be the only one that counts,” I mumble under my breath. A little angel pops up in my head, She’s just trying to help and reassure you, and you're putting her down? Who does that? You should be thanking her. Another, more devilish voice pops up in my head now. It’s her fault. She didn’t coach you good enough, so you fell. Be mad at her. Remember, you still have floor to look forward to, the little devil said sarcastically. The voices argued for a while. The devilish voice took over my brain, and I went on with no guilt. “All level 4s ...